Monday, December 13, 2010


The sirens grew.  Sebastion, in his cubby-spot, heard them too, became red in the face with the renewed hope they brought.  And here, this intruder, this stranger, heard them rise.  Perhaps this was at an end.  They were close and he had nothing, no way out this time.  But they didn’t know he was here, didn’t know he was sitting on this sofa, in this room, in this house.  They didn’t know that because there was no way they could have.  The other homes on this street were too far off to have heard that window break, too far off and too hidden by thick stands of trees, to have seen him in the yard trying the handle on the back door then climbing up on that box of firewood.  No one would have called anyone.  And besides, this house was empty.
He had stood on the bricks of the flower enclosure in front of the only window with a light, pressed his fingers against the sill, and peeked through the dim glass and beyond it.  Nothing.  No one.  Not a figure to behold.

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Sebastion’s father hated cordless telephones.  He had insisted, on several occasions, that there would never be a cordless telephone in his home as long as he was alive.  They just weren’t technologically-advanced enough yet to compete with the clarity of a corded phone.  In fact, Oliver Redfield was so adamant about his beliefs in the quality of a phone connection that every single phone in the Redfield residence was identical.  The one on the wall in the kitchen, the one in the basement, the one in the office at the back of the house, and this one, the bedside set which his son, Sebastion Redfield, lay clutching to his ear with sweaty hands.  They were each the exact same model: a tan desktop three-line business unit, square base with rounded corners and gray buttons, something you’d find on any desk in any cubicle of any office tower downtown.  The redial function, the mute, the flash, all the buttons were in the exact same spot on each telephone so Mr. Redfield never needed to hunt for a function when he needed it.  A whirlwind on the telephone, his conversations were a brunt force that swept through and silenced those on the other end.  He would spit his instructions into the receiver, snap bye at whoever it was, then hit a line button to spit at someone else.  Oliver’s mind was one of precision and single-purpose and be damned if he would waste time looking for a button if he didn’t have to.
The tan cord on the master bedroom’s telephone, spiraled plastic and wire, ran from the nightstand down to Sebastion.  It carried to him the voice of a distant woman, a savior, he thought, one that could solve this whole mess and carry him away from it on her back.  But now, there was a pause coming from the imaginary other side of the conversation.  The idiots, the whole world village of them, were in a meeting.  Leave a message.  Wait your turn.  Make an appointment.  Come back later.  The emergency operator had fallen silent for a speck of time and Sebastion could again hear the pounding of his heart in his ears.  It was a loud drumming, out of time, and he tried to silence it.  Or ignore it.  But he could do neither.  He lay there on his peculiar slant, one shoulder against the cold wall, the other pressed into the carpet, listening intently for the operator’s voice to come back.  He pressed the handset harder and harder against his reddened ear, straining to hear anything from it.  He concentrated, willed her to begin saying something, anything, and in the interim, he started to imagine things.  Everything he saw, he realized, was awash in a yellow tint, everything: the walls, the bedsheets, the carpet.  He shook his head a little, knowing what it meant, but not wanting to.  It led him to imagine—after the operator had typed details on her keyboard and after an address had been given by a dispatcher to a police cruiser already en route down Yonge—that there were gentle footsteps settling into the hallway rug, coming closer to his set-ajar door.  That mental image blurred beneath a yellow wash too and just as he convinced himself that these phantom steps were actually counterfeit, they stopped just outside the bedroom door.  A creak in the floor, one that he knew since childhood, made them real.  The footsteps in the soft carpet, just like the ones in the crunchy snow outside his window, were not a product of a fevered mind.
The hinges of his bedroom door gave a drawn-out squeak and Sebastion’s breath hitched like a prickly bur in his throat.
The operator’s voice came back all at once with a million words of nonsense that he couldn’t understand, couldn’t hear, didn’t want to be spoken aloud.  He’s coming.  Oh by God, he’s coming into my room, he wanted to scream at her.  He hated her now, she was not his savior, she was the enemy too, she with her loud voice creeping into the space around the bed.  Her words were loud whispers, volume rising as they traversed the brisk air in the room and cascaded like caterpillars on the molecules of space all the way to that stranger’s ears.  She wanted the stranger to hear her, Sebastion knew it at that moment, knew that she would never keep quiet.  Here now, just a moment after he had silently begged her to be there and save him with her voice, he wanted her gone, wanted her silenced.  He’s coming and he can hear your voice.  Shut up!  Shut the hell up!  But he didn’t say anything to her.  Couldn’t.  And she kept talking, oh she kept talking.  It was reassuring trivial talk mostly, empty, just her hating him so much that she wanted his hiding spot uncovered.  Oh she hated him!  More questions came from her, traveled the air, ah this woman who was working with the stranger to flush him out:  Where is he now? the hating voice asked.  Can you hear him? the disembodied co-conspirator wanted to know.  Has he left? the operator said in his ear, secret code words that would take flight and seek out strange eardrums. 
Sebastion was silent, betrayed.  His gangly metal limbs were locked still.  All he could do was lay there, his eyes twitching at the strange canted view: the edge of his bed where twisted sheets strew down on him.  And beyond it?  The ceiling where a slight round glow from the bedside lamp lay, for the moment unhindered.  That was nonsense.  That this stranger could hear the operator’s code words, her near-silent muffle of tones from the receiver, pure nonsense.  The figure would not see him here either, would not know that he lay hidden in this spot.  Oh but would surely see the slight quiver in the telephone cord running from the tan base where the gray buttons were, down from the nightstand to the handset, pressed hard against his ear.  The stranger would see that cord and know that someone lay at the other end of it.
The lamp’s glow was broken.  It came from the edge of the rounded light-shape, whatever it was, and it moved across, as if in slow motion.  The wash of piss-vibrant yellow intensified and he was positive he would pass out.  Then everything sped up.  The color blared loudly.  A figure, impossibly large, fell across his vision, blurry with movement.  With both hands the figure reached down to the space between bed and wall.  It grabbed Sebastion by his neck and hauled him to his feet.  Sebastion’s first thought was a panicked cry, Do I know this face?  All grown up but the same—have I seen this face before?
The wash turned from yellow to a concentrated orange, one that screamed inside his head.  He screamed too, at least he tried to.  It came out of the base of his throat more like a stifled call in a windstorm with gravel and dust kicking at the words.  It was the staggered, helpless plea of a man who did not know what was going to happen to him, and it ended in a gagging, choking sound as pressure from the stranger’s hands intensified.  Thoughts were lost.  The face looked vacant.  It looked like nothing—like no one—he had ever seen before.  The handset fell from Sebastion’s twisted fingers, clacked against the wall under the curtains, and trembled on the carpet with a muffled voice still coming from inside.  He stood now, fully gripped by this unnaturally large-seeming man, and he looked into those eyes, the dark, brilliant eyes of a stranger.

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Part of Emergency Operator Forty-One’s training was to remain calm—excruciatingly benign, if necessary.  Cold and detached, if called for.  In fact, that was the biggest lesson her training ever taught her and she remembered it like an animal instinct, drawing from it for each and every duty call she received.  Remaining calm was like a chemical sedative.  Experiencing it induced calm in the person at the other end of the line—she knew that well.  Though the caller could inevitably be experiencing the most terrifying moment of his life, she knew that the human brain could be trained easily and quickly, taking her offered sedative as if she had dissolved it in a glass of water.  A troubled mind can stand apart from the horrors where it dwells.  It can be productive—even in shock, even in the direst times.
Forty-One knew this to be true—true without pause.  The brain could, even though it was under a tumultuous strain, hear another calm voice through its aural facility and mimic that demeanor.  The calm would spread, Forty-One’s instructor had told her.  It would spread easily and more quickly than you can imagine.  Your caller will regain some semblance of composure, not completely—no not ever completely—but he’ll be able to give you the information you need to do your job: address, location within the house.  What you’ve got to do is learn the right questions in any situation, deliver them with that calm you’ve learned, and get the correct details that will save his life: whether the suspect is armed, if anyone has been injured.  And in those rare instances when you can’t be the calm for him, when he can’t learn it from your voice, you’ve got to search it out in his.  You’ve got to put on your goggles and your hard hat and you’ve got to go digging.  Somewhere in the back of his screams, you’ll hear it.  You’ll hear whatever he’s trying to tell you.
But Operator Forty-One, the one on duty that morning, the one that got Sebastion Redfield’s frantic call in the minutes just before the sun would peer across the icy landscape, she heard something in his voice that actually made her spine tingle: a full sixty seconds of silence, a set of scrapes, muffled grunts and bumping noises—then a stifled yell which made her sit upright like an ironing board in her chair.  She heard it with absolute clarity, despite his hysterical crawling voice, despite the sudden volume and the garbled way in which it came out.  For the first time in Forty-One’s seven year career as an emergency operator, she was in that room with one of her callers.  And the words that came, the words which she had heard clambering in the back of his throat, the words which he himself didn’t know had been called out were these:
“He’s in here.”
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  1. A chilling dive back into Sebastion’s deep end!

    “The wash turned from yellow to a concentrated orange, one that screamed inside his head.”

    The unique use of color here heightens the intensity and adds a chilling dimension to the scene as it plays out in my mind.

    “A troubled mind can stand apart from the horrors where it dwells. It can be productive—even in shock, even in the direst times. Forty-One knew this to be true—true without pause.”

    I’m enjoying the transition between perspectives. They’re like the layers of an Atomic Fireball Jawbreaker (that’s a kind of candy here in the U.S.) It burns you beyond the point of comfort, but you’re enjoying yourself enough not to care.

    A smokin’ webisode! Nicely done!

  2. Thanks for the positive feedback! Yes, Ann, colour is going to get *very* important in this story...

  3. OMG! What's going to happen to Sebastion!! How can you keep us hanging like this?!

    His stupid dad! Why didn't he have cordless phones! :) Love that detail.

    Really enjoyed it, even if I am now hopelessly suspended in a state of 'not knowing'. Can't wait for the next episode.
    Great writing Jason!

  4. Yes, Maria! Sebastion's dad will become important. The corded phone is just one of the obstacles he has placed in the path of his grown son.

    So glad you are feeling 'weightless' at the moment! :)


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